Bounty
$15
Website Design and Content Feedback
Ended: 11 months ago
I am in need of some feedback for a new website of ours:
http://www.tapin2media.com
Any good feedback regarding the overall design and content will be rewarded. I am especially looking for feedback on the content on the front section as well as in the services section.
The bounty will be dispersed to whoever deserves it.
Thank you.
http://www.tapin2media.com
Any good feedback regarding the overall design and content will be rewarded. I am especially looking for feedback on the content on the front section as well as in the services section.
The bounty will be dispersed to whoever deserves it.
Thank you.
Responses : 14
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I might have other graphics other than a cell phone on the launch page. Such as a desktop computer, a laptop, or some other form of media. Also, when you do launch the "sevices" button, I might show all the services you list under the price with a link that in more depth explains what you will do for them. They might know they need to get with the technology era but may not know what a "iTunes SEO" or a "Content Optimization" is. So having that defined if they need it, but not cluttering up that page if they don't would solve that. (they just would click the link to get a formal explanation) Otherwise, it looks very good; well organized and up front.Close
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I am a firm believer in a website not being too busy...in other words, too much going on so a person is unsure of how to get where they need to get. However, that being said, I thought that the site was a little too sparce all around. Perhaps a little more color or something to add interest and show that you are a creative company. After all, you are a marketing company. Additionally, in the services section, I thought there should be a place somewhere on that page for contact information. You want make it as easy as you can for a person to contact you for your services. Also, I feel that further explanation in your services is necessary. You could even include a place on that page where a person could put their information so a representative could get back to them to further interest. Just a side note, I have a tendancy to shy away from companies that do not list a location or phone number. Could this be added? I hope this was of some help.Close
$2.00
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11 months ago -
Nice layout overall, a couple things:Close
-Instead of "check us out" I would put "it"
-Once you get to the services I would make then stand out more or at least the titles of them.
-I would put larger social share icons at the bottom, when they are too small like that I doubt even your clients will share it.
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12 months ago -
Change the 1,2,3,4 to a process of actions not the availability of your packages. It infers steps.Close
Make your services page stand out more, this is the page where you sell them.
The four tapin2media pictures need to be featured apps, (unless that is your plan).
About needs to be more in depth, this needs to sell me to not only trust you, but have faith that you will provide me with the service I am looking for.
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11 months ago -
Enlarge the home, about, etc tabs and make them stretch across the entire main screen to make it more appealing. Additionally I would enlarge the main title and possible change it to make it a little more appealing. Remove the Tapin2media tabs at the bottom of the customized campaigns area and simply make them clickable, to avoid an overuse of the logo and redundancyClose
$1.00
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11 months ago -
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11 months ago -
I'm not sure how you approach your clients, negotiations etc. But I would suggest adding a payment system where they can buy the packages up front, you might get a few extra impulse customers that way.Close
Add some more detail in the "about" page about your background and selves, about the principles at least. Also maybe a little more about what you guys do in general, convince me to use your service!
I do like the honest way you guys come across in your descriptions though I would definitely suggest leaving that since so many marketing or PR companies throw BS jargon into everything that everyone can see through.
Good luck!$1.00
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11 months ago -
First of all, it's hard to know exactly what you're selling - at first glance, it looks like cell phones. I'd suggest putting it in the first sentence of your text, something like "We believe the marketing power of a great app should be affordable to everyone ..." (Or maybe "There's no reason why the marketing power of a great app can't be affordable to everyone. After all, some of the biggest apps...."). You could also be more clear in the headline, which isn't very informative as it is now. For example: "Plan a powerful app campaign" or "Apps that get you noticed."Close
Secondly, what is with all the blue? I don't think there's any color more overdone on the Web, between the preponderance of designs like this, the overload of sky-and-cloud backgrounds and the ubiquity of Twitter and Facebook blues in literally every corner. In general if I wanted to stand out, I would make sure that my colors didn't bring to mind some other strong branding.
Also there's a grammatical error in the third sentence of the main copy: You can't use the plural pronoun "their" when referring to the singular "developer" (a common tactic to get around gender pronouns). The sentence is also confusing since the developer's goal IS to get his or her creation noticed. One suggestion: "We work in collaboration with developers to build marketing campaigns that get their creations noticed."
Finally it wouldn't hurt to write the marketing jargon and tone out of the text for your four options in favor of a more conversational tone. Maybe use the same question-and-statement format you used for #2. For example: #1: "Want a free consultation to help you plan a strategy that's right for you? There's no obligation and you'll come away with valuable insights into how to build your business" or #4. "Want the full benefit of all of our professional services and contacts? Our Premiere Package gives you ..." well you get the point.$5.00
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11 months ago -
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11 months ago -
Suggestions:Close
1. Contact information in the footer.
2. Make the about a bit bulkier and add profiles of the exec team to make it look more professional as well as human.
3. For your services page, check out this article: http://www.splashnology.com/article/97-best-practices-of-pricing-page-designs/377/
4. Update your blog url to blog.tapin2media.com instead of http://www.tapin2media.com/category/all/, better for SEO.
Overall it is simple, clean and very nice looking. You just may want the services/about page to pop out at you a bit more, as I believe these are the two that will sell you. Wish you the best with your company.$2.00
Posted:
12 months ago -
Hello!So, the first thing I noticed when I accessed your site is: is missing a disclosure of their services in the front-page. It would be interesting that you put some buttons in the blue box, where the user can navigate and see the services. Put like this: three buttons with the services offered (basic, advanced, premiere) and a short description of them, including the value. Place a section on "frequently questions." Another thing, on the main page has no contact. Put email, twitter, facebook in the end of the page. Another thing, put the "search" button on the main page at the top. In the "services" do something more interactive. Put buttons for users to roll all over the three plans. You can also put on each plane a few demonstrations of yours services in videos, photos. Also, put customer reviews. Put the date and time on the top. The font used in the text is the same in all sections. Use different fonts and colors. This draws attention! I think a great site, the layout just needs to be more interactive! Success always!Close
$2.00
Posted:
12 months ago -
The positives about the website is that it has a clean and well organized front page. I like the color pattern and the picture of the phone. Adding anymore electronics might make it look cluttered. It is easy to read. The Contact Us button is sleek and right there. Some improvements can be that you put a slideshow on the front page with the different packages under services (and when you click on it, it takes you to the services page). With the Services page, you could create a table for the different packages with check marks (it's an easier way to tell what all the packages have similar and different).The logo may need to be upgraded a little bit more (a banner might also make sense). You should move the social plugins such as Twitter and Facebook.com to the front of the page. In addition, the tab font should be a little bigger so that it's easier to read. With these minor adjustments this website will be a lot better.Close
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11 months ago
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